Please give me comments, its only my second tab

 intro
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------|
A|--1-----------3----1----------3-----1-----1/13-----|
D|------3---1-----------3---1------------------------|

 pre-verse
G|----------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------|
A|--1------------------1------------------|
D|------33---11--113-------33---11---113--|

 verse
G|------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|-111------------------------333-35-111---------------------333--3355----|
D|---------333-----111-----------------------333-----111------------------|

 pre-chorus part one x3
G|------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------|
A|-1111------3333-6666----------------|
E|------3333--------------------------|

 pre-chorus part two
G|------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------|
A|-1111-------------------------------|
E|------3333-11111111-----------------|

 chorusx2
G|-------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------|
A|-1111111---553311-33333333-66551133--------|
E|---------33--------------------------------|

pre-verse again
verse again
pre-chorus part one(3 times again)

 pre-chorus part two
G|----------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------|
A|----------------------------------------|
E|--55555555-33333333-1111111111111111----|

chorusx2 again

 Bridge
G|-----------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------|
A|-111-------333--666----------------|
E|------333--------------------------|

G|-----------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------|
A|-111-------333--66666666-----------|
E|------333--------------------------|

G|-------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------|
A|-1111111----------33333333-66551133--------|
E|---------33333333--------------------------|

G|-------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------|
A|-1111111----------33333333-66551133--------|
E|---------33333333--------------------------|

after that, no bass for a little while

 chorus x2

 after the 2 chorus', theres another 2, just a little different
G|-------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------|
A|-1111111----------33333335-66551133--------|
E|---------33333333--------------------------|

 outro
G|-----------------------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------------------|
A|--1----------1----------1----------1-----------|
E|----33-11-11---33-11-11---33-11-11---33-11-11--|

G|-------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------|
A|--1---6\5\3\1------------------------------|
E|----3--------------------------------------|

        END