this is the right progression...it just might not be in the right key.

main riff:
|-----------------------|-----------------------|
|-----------------------|-----------------------|
|0--000-2-02-3-333-2-02-|0--000-2-02-3-333-2-02-|  X2
|-----------------------|-----------------------|

cool ending part:
|-----43--0-2-3--320---------|
|0-3------------------0-3-4--|
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|